Gee, that king has more daughters than Zeus. Great game by the way, it's been a while since I enjoyed a game on NG as much as this one. Keep it up!

This is great! I like the contrast between the relaxing melody and the aggressive bassline.
Some minor points of improvement: the pad that keeps fading in and out during the intro is a bit harsh. Try EQ'ing some of the highs out of there, or use a very slight lowpass filter.
Furthermore, I think the (acoustic?) snare you used doesn't really fit in this track. Try using a different sample for that, one that has more high frequencies to it.

Overall, I like this tune, and I'm looking forward to hearing the finished one!

Okay, so this is pretty much a generic rap song. Try to rap about something else than money and ''haters'' because that gets old pretty quick.
The first rapper (I'm assuming that's you) has a pretty nice flow, but the voice doesn't quite fit with the beat. I'm pretty sure that's all the effects you got going on there.
I'm not too fond of the second rapper since his flow gets a bit sloppy at times.

From a production point of view, the vocals are a bit too loud compared to the beat. Try to get a better mix between the 2, to get it so sound more professional.

So, work a bit on the lyrics and flow, tone it down a bit on the vocal effects (or get a beat that fits better with that voice) and work on your mix a bit more.

Other than that, it's a pretty decent song.

Good track so far. The main problem I've got with it is the snare. It could use some more lower frequencies. Try to boost around 600-ish Hz to give it a bit more power. Ther snare is also rather low in volume, so crank that up a bit as well.
Other than that, good job! Looking forward to hearing the final product.

Cheers!

I shat bricks.

That was some scary shit :P but good job, man!